Second Draft revisions...

I am not happy right now.

Just sayin.

Neither are my characters.

And only because after all the critiquing others, 

I returned to their first story in search for stuff which

- after a break and some distance -

can now be safely cut.

I thought.

Maybe not.

Or?

So I opened a new folder and moved all the tidbits there.

Guess what?

Score of teenagers march up and demand to know what happened to their memories!

I wasn't even aware they paid that close attention.

Better come up with some new problems for them tomorrow.

That will keep 'em busy and shut them up for a while.

Until the next revision...
 think it's the ... ?! one by now.

Not sure about that last statement... my heart...